Hero World

Over the past few weeks, in class we had to make a Narrative story. We had to include a opening, problem, solution, and the ending, 

This is my story and I hope that you like what I have done. We have all had a few weeks to get it completed.

What is your favourite part about the story? 

One time long ago there lived a man called Tim. He was a hero and lived in a city called Hero World.
He was very kind and outgoing compared to the villain called Tom. He had powers of flying, and
invisibility. He was evil because his parents were as well. His parents did everything to try and make
their son evil and it finally worked.

 Tom decided to cast a nasty spell on everyone in Tims original town called Hero World, because he
wanted everyone to turn into zombies. He was running from England which was the country he was
brought to after the tsunami hit in Hero World.  Tom went to his base, his base was on the highest
mountain in the world, and snatched all his ingredients. Like a bit of hair, green food colouring,
and a ripped shirt, and poured them into a huge container then stood back and Pow... It exploded and a
bunch of zombies came out then started chasing Tom.

Tom ran out of his base. They were so close the the cliff as the zombies still ran after him pushing
Tom to the edge of the biggest cliff on earth. Tom used his flying power and flew up into the dark
and gloomy sky, then Tom went to the Hero Tower. It was a tall, enormous, tower that villains come
to and cast spells on to the city. Tom was getting ready to pour his magical overwhelming zombie potion
into the Hero tower. 

Tom started pouring the magic potion into the Tower, making zombies starting to run out everyone
was screaming. Tim woke up with a fright, Wondering why everyone was yelling, He has powers of
flying, and invisibility, as well as Tom. He walked outside and groaned to see zombies in the city.
He got into his bright, shining red and blue costume with wind on it, and flew up, with a serious
face getting ready to fight.

Tim flew down with a BLAST causing Tom to fall from the tower, he fell off so hard the city collapsed.
Everyone was holding on or they would fall in outer space. Then Tim made a huge ginormous magical
ball. It was bright, it was dark purple and abundant. Then threw it at Tim, he blocked it and threw it
back at him. Then Tom fell off the city and never returned back to Hero World. The city survived
and everyone lived happily ever after.